Thursday, July 14, 2005

reichian therapy

This
is one
of those days

when
I cannot
tell the difference

between
organdie, organzine,
organ, organism, orgasm,

organelle,
organon, organisation
& orgone boxes.

3 comments:

Lorna Dee Cervantes said...

Hi, I really like this. Forgive me if the suggestion is presumptuous, but perhaps leave "& orgone" to the line by itself and end with "boxes" as the final, closing line (like the click in the lock; also, for the music). Nice poem. ("Nice" is high praise in my book, & speaks to the melopoeia.)

mark young said...

then
it wouldn't
be organic hay(na)ku!

Renee Wagemans said...

beautiful poem!